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Ok...these last 2 pieces ive been playing around with for a few weeks. So i want you guys to let me know what you think (on my other pieces 2 please). On another note, this next one im going to post was written for a very strong woman. Someone that has played an important role in my life these past few years. She has been almost like a mother to me and she was diagnosed with breast cancer last year. But as i said before she's a very strong woman and now she is cancer free. So being that this month is breast cancer awareness month...i dedicate this next one to her and every woman who has fought the battle of cancer and came out on top.